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I've remade my intro, chose to other theme songs
Dragon claw - DBZ TTT
Burst Open - DBZ TTT
Thanks For Everything
i think you should put more enimies in the show like cell
need some improvements
first thing change the song from event to stream
animation: 4/10 2/5 the animation wasn't really good the quality seemed bad and the motions were bad but still it was a decent animation
music: 6/10 3/5 the music was fine it fit the animation but it was on event and that sucks not good it ruins everything and for the sounds well there wasn't any
some specific tips don't blur backgrounds cause it looks laggy even tough it was an intro you did really told us about anyone just a couple of random battles
but you do have potential
yeah, i know your right, i remade it and now going to upload the new one
This awesome i got the email you sent me you know shadow 2223
Yeah, on which website
Ok first of I think this intro is quite well made. The music is good, the animation is decent, everything looks good.
However, having said all that, I really have to question your premise. You've chosen to throw together Sonic, Mario, and DragonBall Z, ok. Except you've also got Mecha Sonic as your main villain. Does it really seem right to have Goku and Vegeta in there when all they're facing is Mecha Sonic? I mean just how powerful can Mecha Sonic possibly be? It could just be me, but I just think that even with the Chaos Emeralds, Goku and Vegeta could brush him aside with little difficulty after having faced the likes of Cell and Buu. It could be for this very reason that Alvin Earthworm doesn't actually include the Dragon Ball characters in his crossover series, but instead just uses the DBZ storytelling style. I don't know, I'm just speculating on that last one.
Anyway, the point of getting at is your heroes and villains need to be appropriately scaled, like you wouldn't pit Goku against Gargamel from the Smurfs; and I just don't think Mecha Sonic is powerful enough to be a threat to Goku and Vegeta. Feel free to prove me wrong though.
Its based on saiyan saga, plus im changing some stuff, specially his transformations, in the inro thats his complete form, 1% power, thats because in the second saga he will be at 100%, as super master mecha sonic, as you see, this is the first saga :D
Well, This is a copy of SMBZ and it still needs work but its a ok intro (kinda)
what brings SMBZ here
A short film about a park bench
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