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Jul 20, 2011 | 1:10 AM EDT

Author Comments

hi this is my 2nd flash in newgrounds i dont have grapic pencil yet and as I am in university and could not finish all

sorry for my english again .... i need learn a little more xD hehee
if dont understand , blame the google traslator or my english teachers hehehe XD

suggestions
dont clik play if the music intro has sound

Reviews


IceDragon64IceDragon64

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 5, 2011

Not bad

I don't know what this is a parody of, sort of like Mario. Slightly funny. Not bad art, basic animation.

I liked the bits of skeleton falling down.

The english is poor and I blame the author- not somebody else- you are responsible for what you submit. Get someone english to check it if you want it corrected before submission. Especially the title- it is MOST important that the title is right. This title does not make sense.

Don't make excuses for the art, its not that bad, but you can do better- I don't have a graphic tablet either- thousands of NG authors don't. All practicing with the mouse is good for your mouse skills, so keep working with it.


bluewolfen responds:

you know the google traslator that tool Firetrucks XD
really i know a little bit english but i need practice more


123mine123123mine123

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 4, 2011

Your grammar needs improvement...

I didn't laugh, but made me smile!
Nice 2nd Animation! Keep it up! :D


bluewolfen responds:

thx


ScoutGuardScoutGuard

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 3, 2011

good

youre english is really good! i could understand you and that all that mattered!


bluewolfen responds:

thx
i try be better =)
sorry if my PM take a little bit of your time =)
thx again =)


BrazenbladeBrazenblade

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 20, 2011

Yo Yo

Diffidently different most entertaining and funny with the old original arcade sounds in the back ground good graphics great job


bluewolfen responds:

thx i will be better when i have the graphic pencil =)


imperfektximperfektx

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 20, 2011

Reallly bizzare...

It was weird, but i oddly entertaining.


bluewolfen responds:

umm i think bizzarre for the skull part or what ?
thx for your score =)
i work more =)