nice work..
i can see you tried. but it looks kinda great. just next time try to make longer.
Author Comments
Yeah this is a little flash. One of my freinds told me to make a video like this so here is it. The melody in the background I made it.
Tell me what you think.
I am also posting it on Youtube - http://www.youtube.com/us er/Luccin88?feature=mhee
PiasGrann responds:
Yeah I will and thanks :)
Yikes...
It's not actually very interesting or entirely thrilling. It's a good little flash, don't get me wrong, but it doesn't really have much of anything to catch the people's attention.
You could try putting in more things, like ow he might have eluded the police after he murdered her, or maybe put an actual storyline in it. But I guess this is decent...
PiasGrann responds:
Thanks man. I am making a new flash and it is going to be longer and have a story in it.
Ok...
Short but nice. Like it in the end XD
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