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What happens when you befriend a pig from minecraft...? Watch and find out! sound problems were fixed...wait nvm
Music cut half way through - except for the fire... sound ques were WAY off.
You could even hear the crackling of the fire when the animation loops.
You also forgot to stop action keyframe.
The pig-pet-food was kinda funny, though.
Nice music, Nice Loading, Nice Animations (kinda (at least its 3d)), The story line was good but the ending could be portrayed differently instead of just jumping to him eating the pig.
Could use a little more story.
Very good Animation, and voice acting, the only thing I found slightly off was there wasn't realy any motivation for him to do what he does at the end, maybe if you storyboarded it to give him some motivation to do it like IE: "oh no that skeleton realy hurt me.....(light bulb) , THEN the last scene, would make for a much funnier movie over-all in my opinion.
Not bad for a first submission, I know back in the day I couldn't make something half as decent as this.
But here's a couple of suggestions.
First of all, you need a preloader. The file size is quite small not to need one, but without adding a stop anywhere this just keeps on looping forever. You can find plenty of free Newgrounds preloaders in the downloads section.
Secondly, your intro is way too freaking long. If you're going to stick that in front of every movie you make people are going to get tired of waiting.
Either make it skipable, or cut it down so it lasts for around 5 seconds.
Just some handy tips and hope you have more luck in the future.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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