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Jul 8, 2011 | 2:32 PM EDT

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Hi, i'm new to Newgrounds. Not very familiar here yet. Also i never made any loading bars etc , My apologies. I will work on that. This is an movie i made a while back then. I have learned a lot since then. And because i'm on my way to release a new animation, i Decide to join Newgrounds. As a kickstart i choose this movie. I Hope you like it.

http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=yCL05bCtVIk for max preloaded quality(since i havent made a loader for this version. Graphics can be Blurry).

Reviews


FloriellinFloriellin

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

Considering that this was one of your first animations made, at least, I'm assuming it was (since you said a while back then), it really isn't all that bad. The sound effects fits a lil, not completely, like it seemed too loud for the animation or something, but that is just me. ^^;

The concept was nicely well done, but I think you could of done more with it. More tragic or something, perhaps? Like a lot more could of happened along the way. I'm curious as to how he went to the other house, if he even went. He could of just put the envelope in the mailbox he was already at, and walked away...

Perhaps you should make another half? ;p I would watch it.

Anyway, to sum up what I said, the plot-line and the whole idea of this animation was good, even though more could of been added, the sound effects seem a lil off for the animation, and the graphics aren't too good. :p



thenoizemasterthenoizemaster

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

ehhhh

good concept but the graphic,nah..


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Rafiles responds:

Hey, thanks for the review! i agree with you on the graphics. I was just starting with flash when i made this, seeing now i could improve.. a LOT :D


DzyrafaDzyrafa

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

Graph is kind of shitty but the movie, and idea is good! :D


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LaVidaLaVida

Rated 4 / 5 stars

its not bad.... :)

its a really nice story and plot, but I think the art (especially, like, the backgroud) and animation could be improved a bit....


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Rafiles responds:

Thank you for the review! Glad you appriciate the idea and plot. I will try to improve my graphics in the next movie.


ZeoTerraBladeOmegaZeoTerraBladeOmega

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice.

Great stuff, man. You've got a very good understanding of animation and the concept here really pays off. I watched the entire movie and found it to be very entertaining. Hope to see more like this in the future.


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Rafiles responds:

Things that make me happy , are when people watched the full movie, and actually got amused by it( even in despite of bad graphics etc). It's my goal to entertain others.

Thank you for the nice review!