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Special thanks to my brother the beatboxer extraordinaire (for making an INTENTIONALLY bad beatbox),
Pnikskull for the female voices
and Elizibith M. for the awesome dance!
Liked the lines
I thought the lines during the second dance battle was pretty cool, interesting technique. Story could have been a bit more solid, absurd humour only goes so far, and it didn't really seem to fit the theme. Definitely improved from Round 1 though.
Thanx man, helpful review! c:
and those lines during the second face-off were actually just the rough-draft lines.
before I draw anything, I make a rough sketch (with those types of lines), and then trace over them.
but there were so many frames I didn't have time XD
they should have a knife fight at the beach!
You keep improving.
This one had more structure in the story than your last one, but still kept the random funny parts.
The dancing animation was really good as well, quite smooth! I'd just suggest cleaning it up next time.
Cleaning up that many frames gives me nightmares though. :.(
your art style was a good choice for a dancing animation. the story was totally absurd, i love it. voice acting could have been slightly better.
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