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Jul 7, 2011 | 3:26 AM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place July 8, 2011

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Author Comments

My Tofa entry. The topic was "Wrongfully Accused".

-Jake

Reviews


MiloticMasterMiloticMaster

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 7, 2011

Very short though

Brilliant... I guess. Amazing colour and animation, but the story... kinda vague.
Can I guess some kind of animal killed her, judging by the huge cuts in her body? How can you miss something as obvious as that??? (I guess love is blind but that's exaggerating). Although its a brilliant flash, the story leaves a lot of be desired, not clear plot line, and no real resolution (is he dead? Who did it???).
I did take the fact that it was a TOFA entry though- If you gave us the topic or focus of the animation it would be a lot more helpful when people try to interpret it.


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LazyModeComics responds:

Thanks, I'll edit the description now.

-Jake


kakalxlaxkakalxlax

Rated 3 / 5 stars July 7, 2011

what coulded be

a story with so much story potential wasted in a short flash with premature ending



JonHunterJonHunter

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 7, 2011

Awesome

Really awesome style, I was really impressed.
What I thought this lacked was a good voice actor. Or, a good quality to the voiceline. I hope all goes well for you in TOFA.



DaveBrunoDaveBruno

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 7, 2011

Hot Damn!

Great artwork here Jake! Holy Hell I'm jealous of your style! You'll be quite the challenge in later rounds, so I look forward to going against you! Good luck man!


LazyModeComics responds:

Good luck to you too.

-Jake


HolyKonniHolyKonni

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 7, 2011

Wow

Beautiful backrounds, really really good work there! I can really see how much work you put in this. The animation was good, could've been a little more 'alive', if you get what I mean. Also I didn't like the low-quality audio and the voice recording. High-quality audio next time please!! 4/5 9/10