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My Tofa entry. The topic was "Wrongfully Accused".
Very short though
Brilliant... I guess. Amazing colour and animation, but the story... kinda vague.
Can I guess some kind of animal killed her, judging by the huge cuts in her body? How can you miss something as obvious as that??? (I guess love is blind but that's exaggerating). Although its a brilliant flash, the story leaves a lot of be desired, not clear plot line, and no real resolution (is he dead? Who did it???).
I did take the fact that it was a TOFA entry though- If you gave us the topic or focus of the animation it would be a lot more helpful when people try to interpret it.
Thanks, I'll edit the description now.
what coulded be
a story with so much story potential wasted in a short flash with premature ending
Really awesome style, I was really impressed.
What I thought this lacked was a good voice actor. Or, a good quality to the voiceline. I hope all goes well for you in TOFA.
Great artwork here Jake! Holy Hell I'm jealous of your style! You'll be quite the challenge in later rounds, so I look forward to going against you! Good luck man!
Good luck to you too.
Beautiful backrounds, really really good work there! I can really see how much work you put in this. The animation was good, could've been a little more 'alive', if you get what I mean. Also I didn't like the low-quality audio and the voice recording. High-quality audio next time please!! 4/5 9/10
A short film about a park bench
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