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This is probably the first flash I ever made that didn't make my eyes through up when I watched it.
I may add to this flash but don't get your hopes up because I plan to make something newer first.
(that's right, I'm working on something)
Are you a fat kid your self sir?
Actually I'm very skinny..........so uh....yeah.......
It's good to see a fat stick dude for a change
was the terrible part really nessessary? What happened to the good old fashioned I've seen better.
This is not good at all
did you even read the description? it's like half finished. and very old
The story was quite interesting, and the drawings were nice. You had an interesting concept for telling the story that's worth more experimentation. However, it might be worth adding some sound effects (silence isn't exactly appealing). Also, I felt bored at times waiting for the next scene. You could shorten the time between each scene, and make some of the animations faster.
Good work on your first try!
Thanks I plan to edit it soon, I'm glad there are SOME supportive people on newgrounds.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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