Good going

Nice first flash I hope I get to see more from you and watch you grow as an animator.

Good(voice acting was a bit strange, though)

Cool animation, although the voice acting sounded like it was performed by Microsoft Voice Assistant. Never-the-less, it was cool.

Hmmmm...I wonder how I can make some Flash animations?...

Well, you're story is more intersting than mine

It's pretty good. It was a little hard to understand what you were saying, but that's okay. The animation was pretty swell for a first animation. I enjoyed the story too. I hope you continue to animate and that it gets better.

- Winter Hat Lock

...Huh?

I don't... get it.

Sorry this couldn't be more constructive.

Wonderful first flash!

I liked how you moved around to different angles and scenes, instead of sticking to one background. Very nice work!