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Health Reminder: Lesson 2
Sequel to this cartoon http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/392461
Take these pills to prevent any further harm to your body. Your life depends on it.
come at me pain
pain is your friend
This animations writing is f*cking brilliant!
Can I Have A Second Opinion?
I loved the first Health Reminder and was excited to see this one up on the Front Page. Then I watched it. Although still good and funny and delivers its message I'm afraid lightning did not strike twice here. The artwork and animation are still great, sound effects are still great and the voice acting and music are still superb, the story felt a bit rushed and didn't have the same pace that the last one had or the subtlety. I loved the ideas you brought here and what messages you gave, but sad at how you presented it. Overall this is great, but not as good as your first one.
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*Pacing Feels Rushed
*Not As Subtle As The First One
I know you honestly don't give a shit.
But I'd like to say that you did a good job with this one.
This was wonderful. I can eat lettuce again. Thank you Mr. Firth.
A short film about a park bench
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