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I hope you guys like it, and I hope this gets front page <:)
I made this flash animation so that you guys would enjoy a funny clip about hoboes and batman dances xD
Oh my GOD!!
I think this is the worst thing I've ever watched. I mean, you put VERY LITTLE effort in the animation as you did nothing but tween everything and the voice over was terrible. You sounded very emotionless, if that was you even. Plus, Chacarron Macarron with Batman dancing?! Could you say 2007-ish? Also, what's the big deal about Troll face to begin with anyway? That's what I don't get.
The animation was okay, but not very good, but I'm sure you will improve over time. The joke was old to me and the way you portrayed is was very poor. I usually write more detailed reviews, but this flash felt soulless, but I know you will improve in the future!
(Work on writing and animation is what you should gather from my review.)
Stop blaming everyone else for your movie
You're responding to every review left here (most of which try to HELP YOU) with "newgrounds community sucks." Why would you do that? It's not THEIR fault you uploaded a movie. They're just voicing their opinions and if you don't want that, then don't put stuff up here. Just show it to your friends or something.
As for the movie, it was hopelessly derivative and not funny at all. The voice acting was unbearable and it's obvious you can't be older than thirteen. You used mainly other people's work and the only character (I assume) you created was amazingly bland and generic. There's no story. Just one joke, which I think is completely unfunny. I guess that would be acceptable if your timing was a little better, but here it's honestly sort of painful to watch. I have this picture in my mind of you leaning really close to the microphone so your parents can't find out you're making an "inappropriate" flash.
Your art also needs improvement, but it's not that so much as the animation just seems lazy. It looks like most of what you did was tween symbols. And then you managed to make it even worse by adding a video that you didn't even make. Also, you can barely read the sign, but at least you put subtitles in.
I think you still have a ways to go before you make something generally considered "good," but your attempts could be a lot more original. I've looked through your past submissions, and they're all parodies or ripoffs of something else, aside from some standard-looking game demos. So yeah. This will sound corny, but seriously try to find your own style. I think that's what's holding you back creatively. Because most of what you've posted is laughable servitude to more popular media juggernauts.
you just putted together a bunch of already made stuff, without even trying of make a story connection or funny joke, i but that when this popped into your head u thought "wow im now going to be internet famous", but after the idea u have to think in how are u gonna make it happen, try remaking it and effort a lil more in the animation and jokes, also try to make a logic connection
newgrounds community sucks ...
it just lame dude
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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