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awful

Although your animating skills are good, this animation was horrible.

It is a bitch, that is psychopathic and enjoys killing. She is socially awkward and insults people just trying to be nice.

Not a character many people will try and connect with.

Not bad

The animation was very good and the main character is interesting as well, very dark. I did notice some problems though, the voices weren't lined up during the part she met with those two guys, I could see his mouth open and then like a few seconds later his voice would just be played, but maybe it's just my computer or something. Either way, it was fantastic and I hope to see more episodes in the near future. Great job!

Not bad for rushed, not bad at all.

Very interesting main character with lots of room for development. Twisted and macabre, but almost makes you feel sad for her at the same time. I'm rather curious as to what your next direction for this will be. As it was rushed, I think I'll forgive the one character's audio and lack of understandable language. I did however appreciate the artistic styling. Hope to see more.

Some parts good some bad

Good flash overall although it had its bad, points for example, the other characters she would interact with has noticabley less detail (especially the two she meets at the end)

The voicing is not too bad although it was a bit tricky figuring out what she was saying in the beginning (May I suggest adding subtitles to the next episode)

Another thing is the voice used for the boy she meets, it just doesn't match his character.

Besides these issues I think that the animation was generally good (on the main character at least) and the sound was recorded well and did not have a scratchy quality like many other submissions

7.5/10:)

Well

I can tell that there was alot of effort into it, so I can go into this review with an open mind.

Now, the concept of the rebellious character is kind of of funny sometimes, but it seems to be used alot by people today who think they are the most badass, edgiest fucker alive. (Or at least makes they're character think so) The problem I see with this archtype is that it makes them invulnerable to anything, like a demi god. This makes them act like arrogant, very hateable little fags and invokes the reaction of "Wow I wanna punch that twat."..in me at least. When nothing really bad can happen to them...it's boring, because you know exactly what's gonna happen and how it's gonna play out.

The animation in some parts look slightly rushed, yet in other you showed like you really knew what you were doing. That showed potential. I can't say I'm a fan of the color pallet you used, but I get that this is kinda your first so look at other pics and study what colors they use. You know, something more bright and vibrant that won't make my retinas regurgitate. Also please practice shading..alot. I saw that you tended to overshade alot, and you had alot of unnecessary wrinkles and folds, and shaded the outside hair which I didn't get, lol. Wasn't a fan of the linework either but again you can work on that.

The main bitche's mic was decent, and her voice acting wasn't bad at all actually, but she really could enunciate a bit more for some words sounded clustered. The store clerk was perfect. The bald thug made me wanna shit my pants trying to know what the fuck he was saying. I am glad that fucker is dead.

Honestly this can go two roads right now, decent or terrigay. I can't say much about the plost as one wasn't established yet. I'm guessing it might be a one conflict-per-episode type deal, which is good depending on what you wanna do with these characters. I would say to work on making the character more of a sadist and less of a bitch, if that makes sense. I would recommend adding someone to mirror her personality like a cheerier, bright character. You know, to make her more bearable. Seriously, this right now looks like the DVD would be sold at Hot Topic or something.

But 4 real, I ain't hatin on a nigguh.