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This is the opening of a 30 min. short film comedy I wrote, directed, and animated called "Bigger & Better Things"
The film is currently being submitted into the festival circuit.
To view the trailer check out the film's website:
Also follow on facebook and twitter for upcoming screenings!
Special thanks to Joe Schofield and Michael O'Reilly for the sound design.
The animation is good. It is smooth and well animated throughout. The smoke effect that is used could have been a bit more detailed, as it doesn't look quite right in the spots where it is used. It also looks a bit awkward when Scotty gets off of the couch.
The audio is good. The music is slightly repetitive, but matches the tone of the narration well. The rhyming narration adds a bit of comic relief to everything that happens. The audio levels of the narration and characters could be tweaked a little bit.
The plot is good. For an introduction, it's fairly interesting to watch. It keeps the viewer entertained, foreshadowing the possible events of the full short film.
The full short film will likely be well received. Perhaps you could upload it to Newgrounds when you're done entering it into festivals. Even if the file size is too big, an administrator will probably up your limit upon request so you can submit it.
The rest of the film is actually live-action, don't know if I mentioned that...
It was funny.
That girl Kerry cracked me up. She was described as endearing but was hitting on guys in a liquor store and became infatuated with a drunken asshole who treated her like shit and then lost interest in him when he decided to clean up and become a decent human being. That's a pretty good summary for what girls are into these days.
It's a series!
He's got a burger for a head and he lives in bbq-town.
The story of a lazy kid and the people who live at his place. Sometimes stuff happens.
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