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The Legend of David : Ocarina of Doom - Chapter 5 : The Valley of Death
David is Dead... There is no hope for Hyrule now.
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Animation Art all way better
Can't wait for the conclusion
I almost forgot about this series. Its so much like DBZ its not even funny. Lol. I even thought he was going to go super saiyan when he took off his shirt. David's voice is really lame but it gives him a sort of weird charm. The action was good in here(but not as good as previous eps.) This series could be really cool at times and the art and animation was pretty smooth. Overall good job. Can't wait for the conclusion.
Where does this seem familiar.
Where to start..
Overall, your idea with this whole project seems lost, wayward, and often as if it does not know what it wants to be. It collects ideas, scenes, and bits and pieces of similarities and mashes them together lazily. For example, your anatomy with your characters seems almost traced off of the bodies from Dragon ball Z. I would almost have forgiven this, if you put as much detail on the things you DIDNT copy from, such as faces, monsters, ect... The music, sound effects, and so forth didnt help considering they were also practically cut and pasted from movies and soundtracks. Again, this normally doesn't bother me, but the fact that everywhere you seem to look here is plagued by unoriginality really made it hard for me to enjoy this.
Though through the entire flash i couldn't take it seriously. I at first found it very difficult to decide whether this was to be taken seriously or not. I kept expecting some funny joke to lighten the dull "Tension" but it never really came. The voice acting completely ruined what atmosphere you had created through unneeded violence and dialogue. The very obvious echo effects, pitch changes that were used as an excuse for audio effects would have been cool, had this been ten years ago when they were new. Now, with what we have, its clumsy, embarrassing, and almost pointless. The writing seemed.. Non existent.
I could go on but im sure that someone somewhere will disagree and claim this to be an abusive review for whatever reason. I know you put effort into this, and im not trying to bash you down but its honestly how i feel. You spent time and put your own style of animation even if it incorporated familiar themes.
I'll basically give you a 3/10.
- Good animation, but its clear you did some tricks to cut corners to save yourself time.
- Sound quality was lacking and voice acting honestly hurt my ears at times.
- Story was uneventful, forgettable, and overall cliche. The fact that all that really happened in the entire episode was that he got up, killed some stuff, and encountered Gannon really makes me afraid to imagine how long you plan to draw this out.
In the end, i really dont feel this deserves to be put on front page above work that could easily surpass this. Peace.
I can tell you aren't the best animator but this video was totally epic. David is a badass and he doesn't need no gauntlets to judo flip a giant evil monkey thing!
love the part with Din's Fire! I love that move!
This CREAM will fix all of your problems.
Mysterious bunny follows kid home
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