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It has been ages since I posted anything here so thought I would share this one.
It is a short about Mr.Thomas's trip to the doctors for a general checkup.
It was created for an assignment at TAFE.
Reminded me so much of flash animations from the early 2000's
This movie has been inserted into my favorite flashes.
Haha, yea those old flashes were what enthralled me from an early age and lead to me now studying animation.
I feel honored that my flash has been favorited, thank you very much =)
The joke doesn't get conveyed really good. You would need to add one or two more numbers being counted down (in the background) as in the original joke telling version. Also the intro could be a bit shorter as it is accompanying a really short scene. Visuals are okay but there's plenty of room for improvements.
Yea I know what you mean about the intro. I did experiment by completely removing it but without it the flash is just too short.
I will make sure I revise it though :P
and with the visuals, believe it or not they have come a long way already, but Im still working on it, and there will most definitely be a huge improvement over my next few submissions.
Thanks for the review :)
not great not bad but the waiting room was fullo crazys lol
Detective Nwar troubleshoots a hyper-intelligent evil AI.
A magical, musical adventure for the whole family!
More Speedrunnin' & Easter Egg Huntin' ...In Hoenn.
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