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*edit* wow thanks so much for front page! i hope this platform will get people pretty amped about the next episode! i've basically already begun it and can't wait to bring it here! i will try to reply to as many comments as i can

Hey guys!

I'm truly excited to bring the first section of my very own series to Newgrounds. It may not be as action packed as future episodes but i think its a great jumping off point and gives a sense of what the rest of the series will feel like!

Thanks so much to D-mac and Giantjuicy - i made this script a looooong time ago and they probly thought i had forgotten it - im glad to have it out and hope to be contacting the full cast of voice actors for the first episode soon !

I hope to see the first full episode IN the portal by the end of august as well!

So thanks for checkin it out - and try to keep an open mind while watching! (i know this wont be for everyone haha)

i know it feels short but its actually 3min and 3 secs

Full screen and dim the lights - - enjoy!

{{ i will try to respond to as many reviews as i can }}

Reviews


iliketoplaygamesiliketoplaygames

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 29, 2011

I enjoyed it.

I can see you have received mixed reviews from most other people but I would say on the whole I thought it was very good grounds work for the series. I already have an idea of what is probably the main character and his traits and I have the feeling it is going down an X-man route, which suits me because I've got nothing against X-man. 9/10


RedHarvest responds:

i think thats what i like most of this prologue - - people done know if this is going in a superhero direction, or a anime direction, or a completely different direction all together! they will just have to wait and see!


pebspebs

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 29, 2011

whoa nice

this would be a pretty good series


RedHarvest responds:

thanks man


BoogaloogodBoogaloogod

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 29, 2011

Man you guys put some real work in this

And it show. I actually feel really bad rating it 4/8, but the main character is so excrutiatingly annoying. Voices were superb, loved the style of artwork, and as for the plot, i won't beat around the bush, its been done before. That doesn't mean it won't be good, but it does have the need for something to make it stand apart from "We're heroes you've never heard about and you happen to be the only person that can help us" scene.
Looking forward to the next episode.

eat tacos,
~Jon


RedHarvest responds:

yeah man - d-mac and Giant are aces!


LaughingCynicLaughingCynic

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 29, 2011

Pacing...

...get some. Seriously. Too much to fast. You throw way to much at the audience for it to be taken seriously. The narrative resembles Girl Chan in Paradise more than I think you wanted.


RedHarvest responds:

haha ill try to get some man.


EsskadenEsskaden

Rated 3 / 5 stars June 29, 2011

Start

I was kinda eh, about this. since the small amount of info show is a tad over done. But i don't straight up "give up" on it. since it might have a over used premise but its what you do with it and the characters that will make it unique. The voice acting was solid enough and the animation wasn't eye dropping (i've seen better from you). But I DO look forward to seeing where you go with it. I'm always a fan of "Series" on Newground.
P.S makes those character strong! You know you can!


RedHarvest responds:

i think you will be pleased with the rest of the characters in the next ep - thanks for checkin it out