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Jun 27, 2011 | 8:34 PM EDT

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*edit* wow thanks so much for front page! i hope this platform will get people pretty amped about the next episode! i've basically already begun it and can't wait to bring it here! i will try to reply to as many comments as i can

Hey guys!

I'm truly excited to bring the first section of my very own series to Newgrounds. It may not be as action packed as future episodes but i think its a great jumping off point and gives a sense of what the rest of the series will feel like!

Thanks so much to D-mac and Giantjuicy - i made this script a looooong time ago and they probly thought i had forgotten it - im glad to have it out and hope to be contacting the full cast of voice actors for the first episode soon !

I hope to see the first full episode IN the portal by the end of august as well!

So thanks for checkin it out - and try to keep an open mind while watching! (i know this wont be for everyone haha)

i know it feels short but its actually 3min and 3 secs

Full screen and dim the lights - - enjoy!

{{ i will try to respond to as many reviews as i can }}

Reviews


Thanatos0Thanatos0

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 30, 2011

Good start.

Ok the first episode got me interested. Now show me some action.



CatAlexCatAlex

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 30, 2011

haaaah

jeeero, MORE LIKE ZERO. i've been there brah. nice job harvest moon, big mac, and juicykickingballs


RedHarvest responds:

thanks alot man


darappinorcdarappinorc

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 30, 2011

Alright.

The voice acting was definitely above average. The blind man's voice was very good and fitting. The animation was alright, looked a bit awkward at parts.

The main flaw I have with this particular flash is the unlikeable lead. Seriously, he is very annoying. I really hope you flesh him out and give us a reason to like him because as of now even I WOULD like to bully the snot. I look forward to seeing what you do with him.

Another flaw is how cliche the whole flash is but most flashes that opt to go for an epic story falls into this pit. Still this looks promising...


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RedHarvest responds:

haha - bet you you'll love him by the end


holyslayer123holyslayer123

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 30, 2011

Pretty Good Dude

This is pretty interesting and I hope to see the next episode soon!


RedHarvest responds:

thanks for checkin it out man


Burningfox6Burningfox6

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 30, 2011

Very interesting.

This sounds intriguing...

Graphics: Very nice, I like the flow of some of the objects and characters.

Story: Some teenager who was bullied by two delinquents. A lot of stories are like that kind but the plot to save a planet with an orphan and a blind man (Of course along with the other teammates too) makes it very original.

Final Note: I really like the prologue.. I can honestly say I am waiting for the next episode (Hopefully it will come).


RedHarvest responds:

thanks - though it is heavily inspired by some older cartoon/ classic movie concepts - i think its still pretty original- guess people wont knoe till it unfolds