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Jun 27, 2011 | 8:34 PM EDT

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*edit* wow thanks so much for front page! i hope this platform will get people pretty amped about the next episode! i've basically already begun it and can't wait to bring it here! i will try to reply to as many comments as i can

Hey guys!

I'm truly excited to bring the first section of my very own series to Newgrounds. It may not be as action packed as future episodes but i think its a great jumping off point and gives a sense of what the rest of the series will feel like!

Thanks so much to D-mac and Giantjuicy - i made this script a looooong time ago and they probly thought i had forgotten it - im glad to have it out and hope to be contacting the full cast of voice actors for the first episode soon !

I hope to see the first full episode IN the portal by the end of august as well!

So thanks for checkin it out - and try to keep an open mind while watching! (i know this wont be for everyone haha)

i know it feels short but its actually 3min and 3 secs

Full screen and dim the lights - - enjoy!

{{ i will try to respond to as many reviews as i can }}

Reviews


HaimLZHaimLZ

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Sure that was something

A little too animeish for my taste, it was kinda obvious where all was going. The blind guy out of the sudden just say I'm from another planet, in a team, planet needs your help, evil bad guy. The thing is that this story is not attractive (well actually this movie as a trailer/prologue is not) could need some pulishing.

By now your animation were really good what happened here, looked like you had a need to get this one done quickly.

Try to give everyone a little more smart dialogue, don't just make them say everything in one go.

Now my criteria based on 3 points each and an extra point.

Animation: 2 (characters Could have a better anatomy, and the background could use just a little more detail)
Audio: 3 (I love the audio and the voice acting. just did't like the way they talk but it's ok)
Story/Script: 1 (Just like i said before too fast for a single scene movie, and not much too)
EP: 1 (I'll give you that extra point because it takes a lot of courage to pull out a series it definately was a little for me but just a little.)

So thats a seven mate, good work.


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RedHarvest responds:

This is a great review - -just because you didnt prefer the animation you still considered a lot of what WAS done with it which i really appreciate. I shall try to respond accordingly

Animation - you nailed it man - - i have a long way to go - for now its the best i can do to tell the story i have dreamed up - i hope to improve as i go

Audio: 3...scores a little low IMO - i think i have pulled off some of the best audio mixing done in any series on this site and will continue to - it's something i really pride myself on. *wink*

Story:the story will continue to move VERY fast - no time for viewers to be bored or wondering whats going on with the plot- tough cookies on that one mate - its love it or hate it HEHEHEHE

EP: haha thanks for the extra cred homie

thanks again - i believe you will be one of the people that will turn over to my dark side as the series progresses and the characters i have written will win you over.

thanks again

~Red


BemaniAKBemaniAK

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Why

Why is this featured.
A bunch of cliche'd nonsense.
Animation was passable at best.


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RedHarvest responds:

you must be a very sophisticated and well versed expert on the matter. Thanks for gracing my toon with your treasured gaze.


GoTricky5GoTricky5

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hope this gets explained in the first episode.

And i hope those two bullies get their nuts choped off.
Buncha fags is what they were.


RedHarvest responds:

yep! it will all be explained and elaborated! - - not sure we'll see the bullies again though - - thanks for watchin and im glad you liked it!


MoennetMoennet

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Alright!

This is pretty cool, I like the style! ^o^


RedHarvest responds:

alright alright alright - now LADIES -- YEAH??


SuperCoolSonSuperCoolSon

Rated 4 / 5 stars

My first review!!! Anyways it's great :)

This was an excellent prologue.

Animation wise it was good enough. Nothing to annoying aside from Jeero's changing body patterns. He was kinda fat at first then skinny. He had normal arms, then super skinny arms. So as long as you keep a standard non-sloppy look I'll have no problems with the animation. "6" was animated well.

I have a few problems with the script. The voices were done just fine, but Jeero was scared of the bullies one second, then the next he started to fight with them again. Doesn't add up... Although I understand it was a excuse to show 6's abilities even when blind, but still...

Aside from those few faults i was really intrigued. Expecting much from this. I always love long lasting plots. Also the name Jeero = Totally badass.


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RedHarvest responds:

yeah - i need a lot of work on my consitancy, very true.

and yeah! im quite a fan of that name as well! Even though in many reviews people seem annoyed with him - he gets a lot more badass as time progresses so i guess its fine for now that people dont like him haha