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Jun 27, 2011 | 8:34 PM EDT

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*edit* wow thanks so much for front page! i hope this platform will get people pretty amped about the next episode! i've basically already begun it and can't wait to bring it here! i will try to reply to as many comments as i can

Hey guys!

I'm truly excited to bring the first section of my very own series to Newgrounds. It may not be as action packed as future episodes but i think its a great jumping off point and gives a sense of what the rest of the series will feel like!

Thanks so much to D-mac and Giantjuicy - i made this script a looooong time ago and they probly thought i had forgotten it - im glad to have it out and hope to be contacting the full cast of voice actors for the first episode soon !

I hope to see the first full episode IN the portal by the end of august as well!

So thanks for checkin it out - and try to keep an open mind while watching! (i know this wont be for everyone haha)

i know it feels short but its actually 3min and 3 secs

Full screen and dim the lights - - enjoy!

{{ i will try to respond to as many reviews as i can }}



Rated 3 / 5 stars

A good start

I thought it was interesting enough to make me watch future episodes which I assume is what you wanted :p It was good, but a few things. At times I thought the Jeero/ Zero guy was a bit of an idiot. So I didn't really care about what happened to him. Also, I thought the environments could be a little more varied. Something a little more interesting than a desert next time might be nice. Other than that, a little more hand drawn animation might be nice but it's a great start :]

LewToons responds:

i agree actually! the environment on jeero's planet is meant to be much more mundane than the environments where he is headed - so expect them to get even better!


Rated 5 / 5 stars


DAMN! I DO love your type of drawing!


LewToons responds:

happy to hear that man - im excited to start the next one


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Ohh man, it's your own Exile!

Hahaa, i love it :P Keep making this thing dude, and don't quit after 4 episodes like i did :P

LewToons responds:

well i dont know if this story continues for than 5 or 6 actually ( i wrote it in my head so it would be a bit more managable for me actually to compelte)


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow, sounds like this is gonna be a great series!!

For the Prologue, this seems like it's going to go far on newgrounds. I look foreward to seeing more of this series in the future!

LewToons responds:

thanks Electronic boy


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


You got me intrested, i'll be sure to follow this series!

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