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Jun 27, 2011 | 5:29 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Here is my very first flash animated movie ever. Enjoy :)

Reviews


FletcherWolfeFletcherWolfe

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Impressive

This is Impressive for a first time animation movie. Also I like the simplistic nature of the plot. While some say there is not enough of a plot. This is a perfect idea for an animation artist who is still learning the ropes. Also I ike your style of animation.

Star Rating System on Individual Areas

N/A = Not Applicable
1 = Horrible
10 = So Awesome Can Not Describe
Best score possible for each 10/10 (I also do take into account the artists experience on animations)
Also Comments on each will follow

Animation Flow: 7/10 - I ffelt the flow was a tad choppy with the worm's movement however for a beginner this was most excelent
Background: 7/10 - My only complaint is that when the worm was in the grass the grass looked as though you did not put as much effors into it as when the worm was on the dirt other wise very good
Characters: 4/10 - I felt the worm's design lacked the effort put in the rest of the animation however I also know that this was the only truely animated part.
Plot: 8/10 - I will stand by my veiw that detailed animations with simple plots or simplistic animations with detailed plots are the best combonations for good animations
SFX (sound effects): 4/10 - I felt it needed alittle more sound to it but not much

While I was really impressed with this animation I gave you a six because it is not your best simply because you have not reached it yet

I look forward to your next one


Affero responds:

Thanks for the feedback, it really helps alot :)


DussDuss

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very Great first flash

Nice, clean and simple! Keep at it. I'll go and eat an apple now thx :)


Affero responds:

I'm eating one now ^^ watch out for the wormholes though :D