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i know it's not suposed to be saying "presents"
You can test these things locally. There's no need to waste everyone's time with this sort of upload. Even as a standalone animation, it's not that good.
the test was for putting sounds..... but....do you think that one way or an other....we always waste our time on useless stuff? i mean...i bet that you knew that you were going to waste your time by seeing the title of the flash..... but.... i gonna take care of what you've said...
I agree with ericho
Test should be sent to a partner in animation or simply not put on at all, while the animation is good i still have to give this a four
A big nono
While the animation isn't half bad for this, the main fault is that it's a test. Those kinds of things are not popular on this website. At least make a button so that we can replay the thing. It's hard to describe this submission because there isn't a lot that happens. I actually do think that you have some talent in terms of art because this drawing itself isn't that bad. The best part was probably the way the blood comes off her fingers.
Still, that seems more like the kind of thing you would want in an art submission. I don't see why it would not say "Presents". It makes sense to me. The audio isn't that bad, but the problem is that it is simply too short in order for it to be a decent submission in its own right. An interesting story would do a lot of good for this.
well.. sorry that i've put a test because i'm still learning.....the thing of presents is that , at first, it was written «evil never looked so good» (which is my motto for most of the stories not yet published)
here's the original thing i've did http://evilblackcat13.deviantart.com/
The animation is a little choppy.
I think you should add a few more frames to this. (:
And some type of Transition so you KNOW it's an intro for sure.
ok!! i shall keep it in mind...
no wips on front
I would rather see an actual submission without intro than this. The dump and the forum would be a more suitable place for testing material.
yeah.. sorry for this....i'm still learning....and also.. i'm not up to this... those forum.... i feel like i gonna get shit and stuff...
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