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The opening made me feel a little uneasy about the entire flash. Then the killer whale started talking, and I started simultaneously LOLing and thinking. You grabbed my attention. I loved it. My one issue was with the ending, plot-wise: you get this idea of a repentant killer whale, then he goes and threatens death against the interviewer. Deadpan humour, and in most other situations it'd work, but it kind of made me think less of it.
All in all, though, like it a lot: intelligently done, original, decently animated (tbh I think the style of animation furthered the humour in this), and funny!
TL;DR: Props, bro/brah.
Not too shabby
It was original, well thought out, and pretty funny really. The voices were great, animation left some room for improvement, but then again the flash wasnt based on the animation. Bottom line, I enjoyed it, it was entertaining. Good work.
It's .... different
I don't know what to think about it but its pretty funny.
I liked how you gave the whale a realistic personality.
I don't know that this is a comedy really, but I did enjoy it.
You did a good job with the art, and transition, the voices were great.
Its well thought out and overall a fair piece.
i am in love with this! - - nice voice work and mic quality as well ( rare! )
A short film about a park bench
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