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This hasn't seen the light of day in quite a while and I figured it'd be nice to submit something. Took about 5-6 days, 30 fps and all that.
welp, enjoy :3
I love it. Make more NOW.
Its a great idea, but it needs... more...
The idea is good for a simple flash. The animation is good, the only problem is the fact that it had no color and was quite plain. You also should use sound effects and background music. It was rather short and didn't have much action. It also should have a better beginning, such as the ball being shot out like the pinball shooter (not the flipper). It also needs a clear end, I wasn't sure if the ball made it or not, and if it was destroyed, it should be more grand than it just disappearing. You should make something like this except as a 'domino rig' where you have the seemingly random objects colliding and interacting. It was really good for a basic flash, but sadly it was only a basic flash and needed a bit more.
I guess it's not terrible
Well, it's really hard to recommend something that doesn't have any sound and is nothing but a ball running around. I guess the animation was a bit decent, because it did seem to flow well. It should have had some sound effects when the ball hit things. It seems like you are new to Flash and one big thing to do is not to just work on tests. It certainly seemed like a test to me. A lack of color can actually work if the action is good.
The thing is that the action is not very interesting and has little going on. I guess this is good for a test flash, but that kind of thing is not highly reverred on the website. I hope you learn to improve from your mistakes. It seems more like a thing that would go on a personal website instead of a public one. At least you have desire to make Flash.
That was actually quite good to be a ball.
At first, because of the title, I thought this was just a crappy test, but I was actually a little surprised, better than I expected.
Very smooth and good animation, and also a good job on the camera effects.
It desperately needs sound effects. Also, some color or something would be nice. The whole thing reminds me of the flash game, linerider. Obviously theres no real story here, it's just a random ball navigating a random landscape. Eh. Like I say, it's ok.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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