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Jun 22, 2011 | 6:11 AM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place June 23, 2011

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Watch Chapt 1 if you haven't so you'll know wtf is going on but its pretty self explanatory

This quality is as good as I could get under 10mb. It looked awesome at 11mb but ofcourse i can't use that...

so..

ugh

Thanks all the voice actors
Michiku
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Reviews


KwingKwing

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 22, 2012

Interesting, to say the least. The graphics are well done and the animation is decent, though it's hindered by the fact that this is more tweened than frame-by-frame. The dialogue seemed really cliche to me and was quite obnoxious, and the plot seemed pretty boring as well. This really would have been better as an animation showreel than an anime.



SoapbubbleSoapbubble

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 23, 2011

Some great points, some bad points.

This little flash had some great and some not so great points. Good points first:

Voice acting was absolutely amazing, completely crisp, and beautiful. Both the quality and the voices used in general worked perfectly in the story.

And that's the second great part. The storytelling of the flash was just amazing. Such a great story, obviously quite deep, though I have not seen the first episode.

THe animations and graphics however, were not of top quality. THe animation was somewhat choppy throughout, and the drawings, though not too bad when still and in simple poses, it didn't look very good a lot of the time. The quality of the film as well was problematic, with pixels and such.

Also surprised at your choice of music, which didn't seem to fit this flash very well. I'd expect something more asian, and old.

You should also have a preloader and a replay button, instead of having it loop eternally.

Cheers
KAG of the Review Request Club


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Kel-chan responds:

thanks alot

I'm still new to making animations and I'm not sure how to shrink the file to the right size while keeping the quality up and i'm totally stumped on preloaders


DaveOzDaveOz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 23, 2011

The Background Music???

I liked the animation but isn't the background music Indian?


Kel-chan responds:

Korean - its the OST from a show called Chuno


DNRKlypzDNRKlypz

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 23, 2011

Awesome

Very well made. Good story telling. Just find a way around the quality issue and you'll have yourself a bonafide 10.



SolkriegSolkrieg

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 23, 2011

Art need some work.

Voice actors were FLAWLESS- very good.

As for the quality issues, try not using a program that isn't so data hungry?