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he was warned of what lurked in the woods, he wouldnt listen, i uploaded this earlier but due to massive lag from the .swf i had to go back and change a bunch of things, so here it is again!
Not bad...but could have been better
The story-line had a lot of potential, but it was lost with your choppy animation. But otherwise it was well told and certainly had a good fear factor and sent chills down my spine at a few moments of the flash. Well, that's all there is to say, keep it up :)
Just a few minor mistakes in your movies where sometimes on a tween you can see the picture outline or some of the side is white where theres no picture... none of which bothered me to dock your score. However i do like the story my only REAL gripe is your characters look to cartoony for the dark story your telling. Otherwise good stuff.
P.S. i only watched BECAUSE you killed the dog.
But, the animation could be a little smoother...
Also, I half expected the monster thing to be Nana (the pink Ice Climber)
Could use some better animation. I'm sure as you continue your flash path, it'll get better. You've got a nice idea here. I'm a little scared. Other than that, good job.
Not bad at all.
Aside from some static movements, I found this quite entertaining. I liked the story, though there was one part I didn't get. Aside from that It seemed pretty good. Kudos!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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