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Jun 17, 2011 | 1:54 PM EDT
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*EDIT* SWEET NIPPLES! DAILY 3RD! That's the best I've got on NG so far, thanks a lot guys!
*EDIT EDIT* Featured? Jeeez! WOW!

So here it is!
I'm starting Uni this September, and as I go through the years I'm going to be making a kind of "Flash Diary" to document my time there!
Here's an explanation of how the series will work!

Also, thanks to all those who put up with the delays, you guys are truly something :3

Reviews


aydin611aydin611

Rated 5 / 5 stars

ok i love it

bot for some reason it reminds me of EDDSWORLD. The drawing for 1, the British accents for 2, the crazy things happening at once for 3. but its a good video


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RabidRailRabidRail

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good :D

First off, this reminds me a lot of Eddsworld, but I like Eddsworld, so that's good! Silly stupid stuff is my favorite type of comedy, and I found this funny! The voice acting was good, the animation was great, good job, and keep it up! :D

Comments on comments: Druox, I actually don't know. Fine = acceptable, not bad.
Joe, that was the funny part, and the whole video. It was random and silly. I do not know what kind of comedy you and Druox are into, but you probably won't find much of it on Newgrounds.


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joe102joe102

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The one thing

I understand this is just the set up but the one thing that bothers me is the neutral expressions, all I'm going to say is that having really neutral expressions and relatively calm scenes based as the "real" events would creat a contrast with the "fictional" ones made up by having said fictional ones involving only extreem expressions, situations, movements, etc...

Normally a pilot that doesnt really tell someone anything about the series is a bad move but I have to say, judging from the style of comedy involved, a montage of random unrelated events may actually prove to add to the series as a whole.

In short= 2 stars for setting up the series well, 3 stars for what promises to be an entertaining series and 2 stars for nyan cat music, -3 stars for a lack of information regarding the series, I dont know who either are, what their relationship is, and I got very little in way of distinction between reality and his storys (unless there was supposed to be none)

P.S. to anyone reading this: I was trying to be constructive by writing more than "good job" I dont normally give reviews like this so that should show my confidence in the series.



mic200mic200

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great!

Good music, funny, original and just great! The only resons this is not a ten is cause its to short and kinda rediculos.

9/10 Review Stars, 5 Vote Stars! :D



DruoxtheShredderDruoxtheShredder

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Lame

I'm going to give you a fair review, but first I'm going to tell you my opinion: It was lame. And I am probably not going to watch any of the proceeding cartoons.

The pacing was alright, I wish it was a little bit faster, it wasn't slow by much, but seemed to be a LITTLE slow, ya know? Nothing to take away from the actual flash, but it was just a small bother to me, since the music felt faster than the montage :(

I realize it's supposed to be lame and stupid crap, but if that's the case, then reviews that call it lame and stupid crap are beneficial. Not gonna lie, Eddsworld has done this all before, and I didn't like it then. I'm probably not going to like it now.

The voice acting was meh. Obviously was too short to judge your acting abilities, but I had plenty to judge the over-all voice quality and tone. I can also give you a few pointers:

I assume you're using a headset, or a computer usb mic. If you aren't, then you paid way too much for whatever p.o.s. XLR mic you got your hands on. The main issue with usb computer mics is they seem to have no low-end, and it is a very distinctive tone most people can pick up. It doesn't sound good, now, You can maybe help out your vocal tone a bit if you add some low end to your voice files via an EQ plug-in, but really it all depends on whether or not the pic can even pick up those low-end frequencies. But, I say it's worth a try, it can improve the over-all quality of the voices you record :)

The animation was fine, but that was the problem. It was just fine. To me, the lack of extravagant animation and over-exaggerated movements just made the over-all feel of the "exaggerated tales" seem more lame than funny. Ya know? I understand that your animation style may not include exaggerated movement or anything like that, but if that's the case, and you don't want to attempt to adopt some of those techniques, you should be prepared to get a lot of uninterested people who are bored. I realize it's a ton of extra work, but since when did putting extra effort into something worth money not pay off on the internet? ....Maybe it's best we not answer that. >.>

I know the review's rating is low, but I just didn't like this as a whole. It says nothing about you, it's this specific toon that I'm reviewing. It appeals to a large demographic: Little kids, memetards, and anime fans. They aren't the smartest bunch on the internet, but hey. If they'll earn you money to buy food, then more power to ya. I just think that some of my suggestions could give a few people from other groups that aren't 3-20 years old an excuse to bring their friends when they watch something like this. Whether you want to admit it or not, this idea is old hat. You should jazz it up a little bit more than bringing in a giant animal (old hat again.) to use as an excuse to play an over-rated song.

Over-all, i think this will probably be successful...as long as you keep the effort and quality put into each toon consistent, which may or may not leave room for improvement. Your demographic has one big flaw: They aren't as accepting to new things as others are. Like, you don't see memes that have more than one "version" that often. Though you do see animes like that, not many of their fans are willing to admit it. You see where I'm going with this.

So in closing. I don't like it. But, good luck with your series.

Druox.


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