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Nicely done once again. I love the detail on that finch its absolutely hilarious! The voice acting is great as always. I just can't believe I'm half way through the episodes. I'm not going to sleep until I watch all of your stuff :D

After the major improvement in the previous episode I expected a lot more from this one, but you seemed to take a massive step back both in quality of animation and the plot. The plot was very simplistic. A customer wants to buy a bird but everything in the pet shop is falling apart and useless. You just seemed to repeat the same joke over and over and the movie felt very drawn out as a result of it.

The flash is still missing a preloader, play button and replay button. Once more, the pillars look out of place in the intro due to them being the only objects with any depth to them. An apostrophe was missing from the title again as well. Though I guess this may be deliberate and just your style.

There was still no depth to any of the scenes. Pretty much everyone was face on. You had a couple of shots with diagonals during the scene in the aisle, but you still had everything flat rather than adding depth to it.

Once more there was barely any animation and the little that you did have was terrible. The birds being fairly still in the background was acceptable, as they mostly just sit on their perches anyway. Seeing small head movements was nice as it stopped them from being too still, but they were still animated in a rather jerky fashion. The characters arms and heads jumped from one pose to the next, completely missing the important animation in-between to make the movement look more natural. On the few occasions where you didn't jump position you simply motion tweened rather than re-drawing. Perhaps this was better than your usual position jump, but it looked too robotic and far from natural. Some frames of animation seemed to be missing as well when Sean dropped the pieces of paper in the customer's arms and when the customer dropped everything on the floor. They seemed to move too much between frames which looked too jumpy.

What?

This had me spend the whole animation waiting for something to happen.

The script is a huge problem. The same thing happening over and over AND OVER(the customer needing a product, and the salesman giving him random crap) is not funny. Secondly, there are practically no real punchlines.
I'd really like to see some more jokes, something unexpected happening.

Still, the animation was pretty good, although maybe a little too static(not that that has to be a problem in this kind of "sketch" animation, but in this situation it gets a little boring). Also, the voice acting was really great.
You need a more original script, though.

thats life for us

yhea, im quite sure thats how everything in our fucking world works

awesome portrayal

@jimtheman333 everything doesn't have to have a gag in it. Sometimes quality of animation and excellent writing trumps random fight scenes and poop jokes.