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Hey ya'll here's a new toon for ya, this time it's from the REVOLUTIONARY AMAZING LA NOIRE that I really don't enjoy playing! Have a good one!
Lazy, unfinished, big let down.
Out of all the Awesome shorts this one is the worst, bar none. I got psyched when I saw a new Awesome flash on the front page, then I played it and like 30-40 sec. later I seriously am still trying to figure out what that was. It wasn't even your best animating skills. the jokes were insider and left much to be desired not to mention it felt like there should have been so much more to it than there is. This isn't the dynamic egoraptor I have come to expect.
My brother has been watching playthroughs on Youtube about this game and I've watched some parts too. There was SO much more you could have gone off of that would have been really funny. Like the hand to hand combat or the murder scenes. You were sitting on a fucking gold mine and dug not even half a foot into the ground. Instead you decided to do a spoof on the notepad thing, which, however funny, did not give me the big laughs I KNOW your capable of. It is down right lazy to have the kind of skills you possess and pull this out of your ass. There was plenty of material, so many different ways to tackle the comedy aspect and you pick a minor funny note to play off of. Huge let down.
On the animation side, I've seen a lot better from you. Even in previous works. The animation just seemed choppier, espescially the way the bodies moved and changed position. But other than that, seemed very typical of you. Not all that impressive.
On the whole, this had huge potential, great material to run off of but you blew it. It was way too short, the 2 or so jokes you threw at us were pretty funny, good for a chuckle and thats all. This is incredibly forgettable and some of your worst recent work. I expected so much and got so very little. I want to see more next time, not this little teaser thing you have here. You got the skills, put them to work.
Definitely Not Your Best
I can almost see where you wanted to go with this toon, but it honestly felt like you did this on a whim and didn't really plan it out all too well. Which probably would've worked better under different circumstances, but the punchlines for this one came up a bit shorthanded. Although I'd like to say I'm glad you didn't solely rely on crazy face faults and massive screaming this time around and tried a different approach (aside from the poop). Though it didn't quite work too well for this toon in my opinion, I'd like to see you give this more subtle approach more often.
Animation and voice work as usual was nicely done. Felt there was a lot less inbetweens this time around, but it's whatever. I'm assuming the female suspect's voice actor was Suzy Berhow? Found it strange she didn't get any credit, but I'm sure I'm the only idiot here who would care anyway.
You know, from the look of things people still seem to be impressed by your work and greatly enjoyed this one. So I suppose if the fans are happy, keep doing what you're doing. If you ever have the time though, feel free to put in an extra effort to get my wannabe critical ass as well.
Do you have to ruin every new game that comes out. Have you even played any of them? I give you a 5 because your a good animator but I believe your skills could be put to something that doesn't piss countless numbers of people of every time a remarkable game is released to the masses.
The short awesome movies like this one belong in one of those awesome compilations, not standing their own.
good animation, good voicework, bad jokes, too short
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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