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This is my first Animation on Newgrounds, be nice to it :)
One of the biggest flaws of this is that it goes on way too long. It would have been a lot more enjoyable if there had been some actual sound in it too. This seems way too much like a test, which is something generally frowned upon again. The only thing I liked was how you could pause it. It was just unpleasant to see all those black lines everywhere. This would have worked a lot better if it was a tutorial or something. Mostly everything is white space with some poorly done colors.
I'm sorry I didn't like this, but at least it is your first flash. I suggest having a background and having a lot more movement going on. It seems like it's just a bunch of still frames over and over. It needs to be of much higher quality for something that goes on this long. At least you seem to have knowledge of "Dragonball Z".
i know what flash it is...
one of those photo flash shit
this reminds me of the old flashes that was posted on this site when I was about 8. That was 10 years ago but it still took effort then and judging by the length of this flash Im sure this took effort as well. Keep it up :)
IT needs sound, and better editing. fun concept though.
my be decent with a sound track
A short film about a park bench
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