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So, this is a side project I whipped up for the Gun Nuts franchise. It's been awhile since I animated anything, so I apologize for any roughness.
That said, enjoy!
Oh, and the beginning mumble is supposed to be quiet. That's not an error.
Could have been better =P
The voice acting was nice, I liked it.
The topic was alright.
But it could have been better... I mean, a little more movement. I was expecting the big dude to move and get angry at the end, but all I saw was a boring close-up (No offense).
Overall, it was an animation worth watching. Keep up the good work, next time add a little bit more movement and u will be on your way to make good stuff =)
Wow, I never expected anyone to compliment my voice acting. Thanks, man! xD
Yeah, I had originally intended to add another segment to the end, but I was on a deadline and cut it short. In the future I'll try to... spice things up a bit. :)
is that a ditch??? XD
that guy's sure is huge, any way this flash end a little weird. Still like your work, the previous guy talk most of the things any way. :)
Yes, it's a big, giant ditch. :)
Thanks; glad you like!
Good but needs a little touching up.
Overall the animation is fine...but there are roughly two or three things that need fixing up: 1.) The biggest thing that bothered me was the mouths...they were moving really rough and seemed at times to be moving so slowly that it was possible to see the transition between each frame. 2.) The audio in all honesty was a bit choppy and rough in my opinion. Other than these things I overall enjoyed watching your animation and hope to see your future projects as your animation skills steadily improve over time. My Overall Scoring of this: 7/10 Stars; 5/5 Votes (almost 4/5 but I liked the effort you showed and hope to see better projects from you in the future); and I also added your submission to my Favorites. Best wishes and good luck with your adventures in animating.
Vashie: "The Techno and Trance Collector"
The mouths are probably the result of FBF animation. I use no tweens but they're hideous and a lazy man's tool. That said, FBF requires a certain degree of dedication and talent that I am still working on.
For the audio, are you referring to the voicework specifically, or sound in general? The voice acting is not the best, as I did it all myself. xD
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it, and I'll work on improvement. ;)
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