Nice job
But let me just be redundant: work on clarity. Get a better mic, and obviously your animation could use work, but it's off to a great start. Keep it up.
Great script, btw.
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The first animation in the Threes A Crowd series.
Mason Tom and Aaron take a wrong turn to find themselves in a area with a dagger wielding maniac, will they survive, or will they use there childish like minds and as usual screw up?
Cool story bro :p
Good story, but I wish i could hear the speach more clearly. Keep working on it!
ThreesACrowd responds:
Thank you, and yeah on the next one you can here it fine,,, the next ones nearly done :)
Work on it.
Voice and Music need to be clearer and louder. Also drawing neeeds to be smoother and to top it off have better punch lines.
Take it back and work on it.
ThreesACrowd responds:
sure sure
Jokes were in good taste, and quite witty.
Animation is a little bad, but still better than what I can do at the moment, but your story was pretty funny, and I'm looking forward to whater else you guys will come up with!
ThreesACrowd responds:
Thanks for the 9
were working on making it better :)
lol!
It's so stupid it's funny. Don't worry that's a good thing. Now you just need to improve your animations and voice and you will surely be the next.... blah blah blah.... fill in dream!
ThreesACrowd responds:
Thank you, the animation will be better on the next one, the sound is basicly the same, but the story for the next one is longer, and better and living to the dream :)
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