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solidspartan

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Uploaded
Jun 9, 2011 | 11:07 PM EDT

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First animation ever, uploading it to Newgrounds so I have a way to access it (it's for a research assignment)

As you can probably tell, it sucks )':

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ClimbLaddersClimbLadders

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I tried to help.

There too much talking onto the mike. It might help to have the mike a above your mouth, or on the side to reduce the sounds of the strong "P's" "K's" and so fourth. It could also use some color. But before that, it will help to draw better. A way to do this is to make a sketch of basic shapes that you would like to draw first. It's kinda like knowing how something looks, but using basic shapes bo build what you want to draw first. There are things like this online that will help you.

Keep at it !


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SolidSpartan responds:

Thanks for your review! Yeah, my mic is really bad and I was a little too close to it during some of the lines. Drawing isn't too much of a problem for me (surprisingly) but I'm terrible at it when it needs to be put into motion. I guess I used too much of the frame by frame animation, and not enough tweens.


Zir0Zir0

Rated 2 / 5 stars

The animation's alright

Hey.

Get back from the microphone it sounds like you are too close. Either that, or use a higher quality microphone.

The end screen goes by to fast to read, and it would be better if the movie didn't suddenly repeat.

Regarding your comment:
"... uploading it to Newgrounds so I have a way to access it..."

If your main purpose is simply to access it from an online source, then a file hosting service is much better. I recommend something like MediaFire, as you can set up a free account to store your files. (:

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- Ziro out.


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