Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
This is my submission for the first round of TOFA 2011. The theme is "Lost and Found." I hesitate to say too much about the story, because my goal is for it to speak for itself.
As always, thanks go out to Mrs. Glarryg and to everyone who helped with childcare while I worked on this.
I hope you enjoy it.
Another TOFA Delight
I admit that I have been enjoying the TOFA submissions that have been posted lately. They're injecting some needed creativity into the portal. I enjoyed the overall look and feel of this piece. In some places, the art looked a bit hasty with a mismatched color pallate. The plot was a bit difficult to follow at times. Some viewers may be confused by the proceedings, and the flash teeters the line between needing to spell things out, and getting complaints from people who say it is stupid because you didn't spell it out. And the actions of the main character didn't always seem to mesh with what his display screen depicted. Those complaints/critiques aside, I enjoyed the simple whimsy of this flash. I feel a cleaner story is the best improvement that can be made for future flashes. Overall, this was an enjoyable piece, and one that I'd watch again to be entertained.
Sound, design, purpose??? Just wasnt worth anything. Id give constructive criticism but doubtless it would go un heard.
So, you're basically saying that, in order to make something this bad, I'd have to be functionally deficient or have some sort of learning disability? Interesting.
On an unrelated topic, I made a hastily drawn conclusion about you based on your typing, but I've chosen not to share it.
Remember, Jesus loves you.
It's a crazy Mario / DBZ crossover!
Everyday stories and adventures from CCC: The city of opportunities.
A fan-fiction take on the legendary series!
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.