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Cole doesn't like his new partner.
Good Animation, Jokes Died Off
Yeah, I already expected nice animation out of ya, seen plenty of your stuff :p
Sound was clean and audible, as it should be.
I like the concept, especially after having tried a couple of cases in Noire.
Gotta agree with others, though. The jokes just kinda started to die starting with that watermelon one.
You started out really strong, but they kinda just faded, and that last one... okay, after thinking about it, you were probably going for that 'forced joke' feel, so I get that one. But the Watermelon and Yella ones were just..... eeehhhhh.
Always good to see something from you. Keep up the good work!
The humour just kind of fizzled out, I was expecting a punchline.
The art style is very original but there wasn't much actual animation, just talking heads.
Overall this is quite good but nothing very memorable.
Great game but the AI are really stupid,perfect example :) Great animation!
Funny, but who are these guys?
I think Ericho said it best. The graphics and animation were really well done. The expression of the faces, movement of the eyes were really well thoguht out and executed. I'll have to take a look at your other stuff, but I was pretty happy with the result. I didn't know who these characters are, so not having any background made it difficult to understand why he was so racist, but not really an issue.
I took off some stars because of the lack of action. This is what would be considered talking heads. Also, in terms of plot, there was no progressive plot. It was a "story" per-say. However, I can't say one way or another if that's what you were going for. All that aside, I'm interested in seeing more, and I'm definitly going to check out some of your other work.
Great, but I have an issue with it...
It didn't go on forever.
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