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Jun 7, 2011 | 6:10 PM EDT
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Jacqueline and the Spawn, an original series

One day Jacqueline's pet rock dies so she consults the internet in order to find a chant to summon the demon lord who can revive her dead pet rock. Upon summoning the demon lord he grants her the revival of the rock but casts a curse on her, "If you do not demolish the seven deadly sins upon seven different people by your 18th birthday, you shall be enslaved by me for the rest of eternity". In order to assist and keep watch of her, the demon lord attaches one of his demon spawns to her arm that she calls Kyle.

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RequenRequen

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

To much of a good thing...

It was very random, to random to make sense sometimes. Be a little bit more consistent to an actual story rather than just throwing random jokes in here and there and it will be much better.

Animation was great and so was the voice acting. Very smooth and no real roughness to speak of.

The series has potential, just make the jokes seem more smooth and more direct to the story rather than making the story change for the jokes.


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ZideneZidene

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

intresting

orginal ish for sure, but the main character seems to random to give a good plot coheriancy, or shes just a bit retarded. tho i gotta admit it did make me lol.

but i am sorta a stickler for a good story line in a series. its got the makeings of a good one. hope she gets a nemsisis too.


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ImperialNarwhalImperialNarwhal

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

High hopes for the future

While Neophyte-Ronin is far to busy crushing on you, I shall leave an actual review.

To be honest, it feels like someone took generic anime themes, mashed them in a blender with Invader Zim, and threw in a pinch of Le Ego Rapatwa.

The punchlines seem forced and depend almost entirely on the zoomed in facial reactions to get chuckles, this is fine of course, in moderation.

Despite all this, here is a shiny 7, because while it lacks in humor, it makes up for in the sheer fact that you can take this storyline so far. IMO demons in anime feel overdone to me, but I won't knock points for that.

To defend my lover Oney from Ronin, he needs not the intricate storyline because the humor is at a high enough degree that a story would get in the way, but in flashes like this, where the humor falls short, an in-depth story is heavily needed.


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Sumbody69Sumbody69

Rated 3 / 5 stars

im sorry but this was not that special or funny

i give you a six for the work you put into it but other then that far from perfect. I love how 10's are given out so easily now on newgrounds it makes me sad for all the people who make excellent work that doesnt get noticed because of this front page crap