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A group of screw ups were fired from their current job for the 26Âº time, and it seems they ran out of places to go.
The first piece of my original serie "Deliverance"
First posted on DeviantArt.com, but wanted to share with Newgrounds.
hope you guys like it =)
Dude i totally loved it!!!! You have skillz!!!
Thank you very much, means a lot
Pretty sweet work
I can already tell that this has great potential. You do need to work on your art though, and perhaps you can rake up a couple of voice actors on NG, but don't listen to me, I don't have enough experience about this anyway.
Art: You need to use the blur more. Your backgrounds look very flat, just look up the tutorial section and it should explain. Your characters are fine, but you need to use the filters a bit more. The anime-like expressions are great, and voice sync is pretty cool too.
Sound: Sounds are pretty great by themselves. The voicing is very good, although by sound alone its pretty hard to tell the two guys apart. The random clips work well, just add a little background music and you should be fine.
Story: Pretty self-explanatory. Great characters, great storyline. The subs are... mostly incorrect.
thanks a lot for the review, very well put
there are still a lot of aspects that I gotta work on, and a lot of effects that I still don't know how to use.
I allready posted episode 2, hope ya like it
It was good
It needs a better score than 3.61
Amazing I Liked Everything Especially All The Little Gags But Also The PWN button At The End So This Definably Deserving my first 10/10 And Front Page XD
wow thank you so much ^^
wait, this was on the front page?
I know I used your line in the 5th Episode of deliverance but it makes sense no?
NO? Then you guys have no life! but great flash movie... And funny.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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