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A group of screw ups were fired from their current job for the 26Âº time, and it seems they ran out of places to go.
The first piece of my original serie "Deliverance"
First posted on DeviantArt.com, but wanted to share with Newgrounds.
hope you guys like it =)
Pretty sweet work
I can already tell that this has great potential. You do need to work on your art though, and perhaps you can rake up a couple of voice actors on NG, but don't listen to me, I don't have enough experience about this anyway.
Art: You need to use the blur more. Your backgrounds look very flat, just look up the tutorial section and it should explain. Your characters are fine, but you need to use the filters a bit more. The anime-like expressions are great, and voice sync is pretty cool too.
Sound: Sounds are pretty great by themselves. The voicing is very good, although by sound alone its pretty hard to tell the two guys apart. The random clips work well, just add a little background music and you should be fine.
Story: Pretty self-explanatory. Great characters, great storyline. The subs are... mostly incorrect.
thanks a lot for the review, very well put
there are still a lot of aspects that I gotta work on, and a lot of effects that I still don't know how to use.
I allready posted episode 2, hope ya like it
I can see this turning into one of the well-acclaimed series in the future of Newgrounds. I really liked the jokes throughout this, the art, and how you informed the viewers of the characters' individual traits. I like also that you made a perfect trio -- 2 guys and a girl AND one smart, two stupid and oblivious (one of those stupid being slightly smarter than other).
Greatly delivered (see what I did thar?) story, and I can't wait for the episodes to follow. Please proofread and spell-check the subtitles, though; it's all jibber jabber made of mostly incorrectly spelled words.
-Poorly Written Subtitles
very happy to hear that
i'll post the next one shortly =)
Amazing I Liked Everything Especially All The Little Gags But Also The PWN button At The End So This Definably Deserving my first 10/10 And Front Page XD
wow thank you so much ^^
wait, this was on the front page?
i liked the changing styles, but i feel it could have been shorter and would have been more entertaining kuz some parts draged on and you need to work on your animation timing a bit ex. the bird getting shot - birds dont move tht slow, and the first background the perspective was off. but good potential so i give you a
appreciate your comment, hope you like the next episodes better.
thanks mate =)
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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