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Most of my videos will have voice, unless I think the text voices fit them better, Im getting a voice recorder in a week or so, until then I'll upload the ones I have that are best in text to audio form
Ok so this was a lil differant, it was entertaining enough but was abit on the low end side of things on quality, the "VOICES" were ok but could have used some better direction and making the voices sound differant would have helped aswell, there was just alot of repettive-ness with the jokes and all, The "ANIMATION" could be directed alot better aswell, as it was kinda poorly handled, Some of the jokes were pretty good and i got a few lauhs but for the most part they could have been better and more creative with the humor. so there is some more effort that can be done, wich i have stated already, anyways good luck on your next piece.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are a number of things that could be worked on >> Voices were ok but could have used some better direction and making the voices sound differant would have helped, and then there was the animation kinda sloppy and could have been abit more smoother. some of the jokes were stale could have been more creative there.
Why did the man have the voice of a woman? Your dialoguing is pretty poor. Only 5-year-old brats talk like the characters you portrayed in this video - if you were trying to make fun of people who speak like this, then i would suggest focusing more on the satire aspect rather than the subject.
There is a rule of thumb for this website and that is not to use "Go Animate". See Happy Harry's cartoon for better explanation of this. I have never seen a single cartoon used in this way that got a good award or even front page. The voices just seemed so off in this. It was just the same boring talk featuring dirty jokes over and over. It may in fact be the most poor animation I have ever seen. John Kricfalusi would hunt down and kill whoever's responsible for this.
The only mildly entertaing part was the nuts joke. It's just that so many people are used to genuine voices and movement in animation. Even lower quality stuff has that. Please try to use regular Flash Player because I really don't think this can ever work on this website. It's nice for a start, but try to be a lot more original.
this is a screen capture/flash capture..
this is not flash game or flash video.
you used screen capture software or flash catch program and uploaded this to NG.
no starts or rating...
make something in flash or submit the original file with the proper quality.
I believe they called for constructive criticism, not some guy to be a butthole about it not being in the format he wanted in, not thinking it is funny is one thing, but you are just unlikeable.
P.S. Plus your wrong about it being a screen or flash capture
Talk about talkin' shit!
Lol, thanks! Im glad you enjoyed it!
A short film about a park bench
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