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May 27, 2011 | 11:34 PM EDT

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This is a cartoon based on my comic strip, "Guinea Something Good," found at http://www.JoeGP.com (updated every weekday). It's my first animation after taking an "Intro to 2d Animation" class. It took about three months to complete. This was a completely solo project (completely).

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savage011savage011

Rated 4 / 5 stars

heyooo

so i thought the joke itself wasnt that good and kinda dragged on, but damn thats some fine animation skills you got there. Ive seen your earlier projects and this is a massive step up. Just make sure next time you voice act you make it less obvious that your reading off a script, put some emotion into it.


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swaenKswaenK

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

needs to be funnier

great animation but you need to get yourself a writer.


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EmroxEmrox

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Interesting indeed.

Although you clearly spent a good amount of time on this animation, the motion of the characters wasn't very realistic. While it was quite fluid FBF, it lacked the ease and timing that would add to the realism.

Take a look at this: bit.ly/g4FLM
You can see that the team of animators that created that cutscene put lots of effort into animating it. However, the movements are extremely choppy and unrealistic. Learning to ease into and out of different poses can help make the frame by frame more natural. The easiest way to do this is to insert one more frame in between the first frame and the second frame, and the last frame and the second to last frame. Then inbetween the added frames, and repeat this process until the motion looks realistic.

You put lots of time and effort into making the animation, and I think it really made a difference. But no matter how much time you put in, a good understanding of motion can always make an animation look better.


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OddSocksOddSocks

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Voice acting was lacking

But aside from that it was pretty good, and I laughed a couple of times. The animation was great too.


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KingDavidKingDavid

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good

altho i felt some parts on the dialoge could have been better expressed, and one stance stuck out 2 me as really off balance. other than that it was great, could have been a lil smoother - take ur time a bit more next time 2 achieve perfection yo