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The half poptart alien Nyan Cats have come to Earth and are destroying everything in their path!
Whatever shall we do? D:
Runtime approx 3min
It Was Good...
But as some have said, you tried too hard for the comedy, and there were quite few lines that actually made me laugh, such as the end where the soldier said "I'll Eat Your Corpse" and then blasted the Captain (or whoever he was).
Nice try with those jokes, though. Nice animation, I like what you had to say about that soldier and the captain (he eats corpses lol), liked the background music and the sound of Nyan Cats falling from the sky. Really liked that. You also could have focused more on the Nyan Cats invading. You just have two guys talking back and forth about eating corpses and wondering about aliens from outer space. The animation was also quite smooth and the mouth movements were good :D
-Tries Too Hard to Be Funny
-Didn't Focus Enough on Nyan Cats
+Nice BG Music
+Nice Nyan Cat SFX
Final Score: 8/10, 4/5.
Nyancat is gonna be awesome for more vids
Did the voices change halfway through?
They did! Well spotted. I had to redo some bits near the end. Without realising it the microphone quality was significantly improved the second time round
A lot of misused potential.
I can clearly see how much effort you put into this and frankly it's nice.
But the rhythm of the story is somewhat boring and trying to hard to be funny.
The animation is great.
The idea is original.
The humor is pushing and tiring eventually.
The punch "I will eat your corpse" is trying to be random but expected.
Animation is great just work on your scripting a litlle.
Despite what I said it will get a mark, at least 5th place because it is good.
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