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Made this movie for my science class...supposed to do a comic strip but she let me do this instead....
It was ok... The voices sounded a little off and the animation was meh... Nothing too good about this flash but looking on the bright side there isn't anything too bad about it either. It's a lot better than most of the junk that you can find on here, but there was a lot of room for improvement. Seeing as how this was for your science class I'm assuming you didn't have much time to make it anyways so that could be the cause for the lacking of quality. 3/5. 6/10!
I assume you got an A? Good job. The yellow stars voice sounds off, sounds like you were shooting for something you didn't quite get. The animation of the characters was smooth so kudos on that.
I was expecting to see a more violent death of a star, such as the Red Giant exploding and taking out the yellow one, but I suppose that wasn't really the point of the cartoon.
The point is, this is one of those rare educational Flash cartoons. Not that entertaining, but what they presented about stars was factual, so you might just learn something by watching this.
The animation was decent, but the cartoon was rough around the edges. Next time, be sure to put more effort into the voice-over; it was kind of sloppy. Also, proofread! If you're going to be educational, bee shure too hav corect spelig. It shows!
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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