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Crown Guy suggests that DJG gets a job.
Please leave your comments and reviews. I'd love to hear your response! Good or bad! I plan to improve!
So you should probally add a background to make it more tolerable to see while you are listening, also you should make them blink. The voices arent that good you should probally get a voice actor or get better equipment if possible. And also when the guys are talking you should sinc the mouths better. The go when they arent talking sometimes. Its very long and I like the part where he reviews the shows but you need alot more animation because it gets boring of staring at the same thing for a long time.
Yeah, I was speculating what I should've done for that whole "reviewing" scene. My mind was being unoriginal at the time, so I spent about two hours syncing to voices to go along with the pictures and all that stuff. I may go back some day and make that scene more interesting. Someday....
And, yes, I need to get the whole "mouth-syncing" deal in order. Thanks for pointing it out.
And I did hire someone to do the voice for the guy on the intercom. It turned out better than I expected, so I may hire someone to do the voice for Crown Guy (the bald one). But I'd prefer to do the DJG voice myself.
Anyways, thanks for your review! It's very well appreciated! :D
I want that job!
You can get a job yelling at people who are addicted to candy bars? Since when?! I've been wasting my life!
Some fun stuff in here. It seems the audio still needs cleaned up a bit, so I'd work on that for the next go around. Lower the input volume and try to move about 12 inches further from the mic. It should help a lot.
Also here's another quick thing. On a character turn, you can just insert one (three would be best) in betweens and it will work better than just flat rotation. Unless you were going for that look. Anyway, keep at it!
Yes, I'm going for that whole "paper" look in my animation. So that was intended.
Also, I will have to watch that darned audio. Once you get in the recording mood, you don't really think of what you're doing.
"You can get a job yelling at people who are addicted to candy bars? Since when?! I've been wasting my life!"
Hahaha, I wish that was an actual job. What with all these health programs going around, this job may be available soon! XD
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
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