The Game Is Somewhat Lame, Is About Crossing Like Frogger?, Is Really Shit...

epic failure. This is impossible!!!!!!!!!!!

Needs sound

There wasn't much detail in this and overall it didn't look like it took a lot of effort to make. What I did like was that it does have pretty straightforward gameplay, at least on the first level. I think there might be a glitch in the system. I died once and then I went to the second level, I think. The weird thing was that I was unable to do anything and it was just some blue guy running across the screen in some way. I guess it's not supposed to make much sense as a game still in production. That's another problem.

Unless demos have a lot of detail put into them, you probably shouldn't submit them to this website. It must be painful getting the Turd Of The Week award. You can still look at it in a positive way to see how you can improve yourself. There need to be a lot more effects with shading and such. Don't make any objects look the same and make them all distinct.

Good work so far man

How long have you been learning flash? Defiantly not a bad effort, actionscript takes a while to get your head round so yea keep at it, can be really rewarding when you get stuff finished. Also you can make quite a bit of money with the right contacts. I've been paid for 2 games so far and working on a 3rd one now. £700 a time and I haven't even set up a portfolio yet (will be able to charge more once that is sorted), just getting work from word of mouth.

So yea keep at it, and you should try to learn the animation side of things a bit more too.

Wow...

I go on Newgrounds to play fun games and see big hits as they come out. I know making good games is hard, but at least put effort into it before you upload it.