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May 23, 2011 | 4:57 AM EDT

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This is my first "real" attempt at flash animation. This was for for a school project , but that doesn't really matter I guess. Well, please give me feedback, with tips on how I can improve or give me some praise that I don't think I deserve. And Thank you for watching.

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TwinightsTwinights

Rated 3 / 5 stars May 23, 2011

Hmm

There is a lot of room for improvement, but this isn't a bad flash for a first 'real' attempt :P Effort was definitely put into this and I hope to see you get better and better.
Keep practicing and improving and i'm sure you will become an accomplished flash animator.


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TheMediocre responds:

thanks for this review, it really brightened my mood, I hope my future films can improve. =D


SankibaSankiba

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 23, 2011

okasaaay??

mmmmm



TheAmbroseTheAmbrose

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars May 23, 2011

kinda poor.. but as it's for a project...

bad jokes, bad points


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TheMediocre responds:

thanks for the input, I'll try to improve my writing to make better jokes. Thanks for the review.


Darkhart22Darkhart22

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 23, 2011

wow

why does every movie that has a boot camp scene find the urge to rip from Full Metal Jacket? Also was that a rip from Eddsworld? that Hilary bit, or did they rip that too?


TheMediocre responds:

unfortunately for me I never saw full metal jacket, but your right the Hilary bit was from Eddsworld, but I thought I'd put enough of a twist in to get away with it, thanks for the review.


GedabGedab

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 23, 2011

Not too shabby!

Pretty good, except for the fact that the sound of the kid playing the game and that annoying clicking sound for the contract kept looping.


TheMediocre responds:

thanks, I'll look into that and see if I can fix it.