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SWAT created by FregosoMedia
By: Jorge Reyes Fregoso
Music: Tomorrow by SR-71
Edition: Luis Fregoso
Hey, pretty good!
There was some interesting uses of animations in the SWAT logo dropping down and the text streaming by the van. I also liked the direction in the beginning with the 911 call, it got me invested in the story unfolding.
However, I should point out that members of a SWAT team would not have their fingers on the trigger unless they were about to shoot. While the weapon drawings were good, you should have shown the index finger straight along where the safety would be located.
I might have gone higher than 5, but sadly I don't read Spainish too well and I could only take educated guesses at the dialogue. I still got the gist of what they were saying, though, and I'm interested to find out what happens next! :) I'm also on the fence about stickman animations...
Thanks, I appreciate your comment.
I`ll try to improve my work :)
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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