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VERSION EN ESPAÑOL EN MI PERFIL

UPDATE: WHAT? Featured on the front page? Thanks newgrounds!! :D

Check out part 1 first. It's on my profile.

Third animation so far. Nearly two months in the making also but you can see some improvement over the previous one. Thanks to Sam Haft (sshafty1) for the music.

Feedback is welcome :)

Reviews


FullTimeJerkFullTimeJerk

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 24, 2011

Eh, okay

It was decent in terms of animation. Get better with voice acting, your accent is thick enough to where I know it's you throughout the thing.

Other than that, great job for a third time.


somezombie responds:

Yeah, it's me throughout the whole thing. I just didn't want to waste time searching for voice actors... Next time i'll definetly do it though.

Thanks for the compliment man.


PoopwardoPoopwardo

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 26, 2011

Strange Story Line

The flash doesn't really make that much sense. Like what was that thing that just attacked the main character in the PC? Though the animation and voice acting was okay. It was long enough for me to consider it entertaining. It look liked it took some effort. So how about I give it a seven and call it okay?


somezombie responds:

Okay! :D
BTW you could understand the part with that thing coming out from the PC if you go watch part 1 :).


TouchEverythingTouchEverything

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 30, 2011

Ish...

Not bad, but the voice acting was a bit terrible, the mouth animations looked awful and the animation seemed rushed.


somezombie responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) will keep that in mind.


everveseverves

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars May 26, 2011

Could have been better!

It is pretty good, but, music and speech volume scaling if just off, first you get your headphones up until you can hear what is he saying and then music comes on and you fall of the damn chair, that's plain annoing.


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somezombie responds:

Yeah, I'll definetly fix that part on the next one. Thanks for the review.


AlienRodeoAlienRodeo

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 26, 2011

Story

was a tad predictable. I knew as soon as he started doing the project that it would turn out to be due in some time in the future. The voices were not very expressive and the animation was mediocre. It didn't suck though. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. Keep at it and your bound to get good.


somezombie responds:

Predictable? you knew it? a lot of things could've happen... It could've been too late for the project, he could've not finish it, it could've been of another subject, the plot could've go on forgeting about the project, and what's the point on writing more things down? I actually love the feedback, but I honestly don't think this was predictable.

You say the animation was mediocre. I accept that, but I couln't have done it any better, I'm just a beginner. I do focus on making each animation better than the previous one.

And about the voices... I though they were actually pretty expresive (except in the part where the characters are thinking), but i'll definetly take that into consideration for the future.

Thanks a lot for the review, I really really apreciate the feedback :).