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Carl has had it with Larry's rudeness for the last time.
I got my revenge in other ways.
My only advice to you would be to put a bit more energy into your voice acting. Other than that I enjoyed it.
More energy, gotcha ,and thank you.
Stlye is great, writing not so much
I absolutely LOVED your art style and thr animation style!!! The plot/jokes weren't funny and neither was the dialogue but I honestly love your animation.
I admire your honesty :3
I like the video and all, but was there some sort of series before THIS episode? I'm not trying to be rude, but it says "Carl has had it with Larry's rudeness for the last time." Does that mean there have been OTHER episodes where Carl has put up with this? I'm just confused. Because, you make it sound AND look like that there was a LONG series of episodes before this one. Are you helping someone who accidentally removed his flash from the computer? Or are you someone banned, continuing the show, while not realizing that the rest of the people do NOT know what has happened in the past? Or did you just forget your password on a different account? Please respond.
Woah nelly , I think your'e thinking a tad bit much there comrade and I do apologize for any confusion. This flash is really a test bed of ideas to see if they'd work. I guess you could consider this "episode 0" for these guys (and an secret 3rd character >__>) for now.
tl;dr No episodes previous, further are pending, sorry for the confusion :D
Nothing Special, Just Half-Smile Worthy Fun
Just to be sure, the use of the "F" word twice, spoken or otherwise, warrants an "R" rating according to the MPAA (in NG terms, a Mature, or "M" rating). Freakin' is okay, however. If it's used once, it gets a PG-13 (aka "T").
Now that we've squared that away, I must say that, while the sounds are low in volume, they are both clear, with solid voice-overs. It's a cute sit-com skit with the emergence of a prismacolor elder goddess to boot. While it's nothing extraordinary in terms of visuals, it is actually a good example of flash cartoon design. It's also low in file size (considering Flash is meant to be that way), so props to that. The use of pixels, on the other hand, is raster in action; smooth vectors would probably reduce the size and make things look even better. But that's neither here nor there.
Given the compact time frame and ease of creation, this can be a fair series if you put efforts toward that. It's a little too much like Bert & Ernie (which summarizes Destructo Box, come to think of it), and by that I can safely say that I'm happier without roommates. Far happier. Stick with what works with you, but don't be afraid to try something original.
Thanks for reminding me to change the rating (totally forgot about that bit of written language towards the end of the skit) and that insightful review. :D
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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