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Well, this is my first Flash Animation. I just made it for fun because I have in interest in animation. So, I would enjoy if you guys left some constructive criticism instead of calling me a homosexual.
Too fast, needs a replay button instead of a loop.
The animation is cute, but it is too quick. Dialog is piled on top of itself and then it starts immediately looping. The viewer hears the whole thing three or four times while trying to decide how to vote - and it gets old fast.
Slow it down and learn how to put a replay button in. You've got promise.
it's just too short, would have been funny if blood splattered the walls or something like that. UNDERRATED!
I'm sure some people will be mean and rude, but I'll say this: I see potential if you keep working at it. Sure, there's no story here, etc, but at least you had sound and whatnot. And you did make me laugh with teh "Looking for these asshole?" line. So that is something.
Anyway, keep practicing man.
A short funny video!
Learn how to stop the animation, and present a preloader as well as a replay option. That's my two cents. I liked the humor, you have good taste in humor.
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