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Hey guys! Well this is my first animation (: The classic Fire V/S Ice theme. ^-^
I will accept any criticism hard or mild. I need it a lot!
Thanks for watching ^-^.
AWESOME TO THE EXTREME!!!!!!!!!!
DUDE, in the beginning blaze did a fire teleport!! that's scorpion's move!!! i just watched a video that did the same thing, although it was a bit different from this!! awesome video!! you have so much potential!!!! reveal it to the world!! oh and next time try fire ball and ice tower attacks!!! those are great ideas for attacks!! you might be asking for criticism but you get praise from me!! awesome job!!!
Why thank you! Yes your ideas are great, I'll try and implement them on my next version. (:
This is good for a first animation, i recommend more FPS though, for the most part its better than most i see, i would also recommend you get a play button instead of having it repeat over and over.
keep making them and you will certainly become better than me in no time :)
Ahaha yeah the play button, I forgot to put that in. Yeah I'll add that and increase FPS too, thanks. (:
Pretty good for your first flash. The animation of the characters is really good. I would suggest you put a little more time into the visual effects. For example, when the ice shatters draw out pieces of ice breaking apart instead of just the blue lines and a more detailed setting (trees, clouds, etc.). The time you put into your work will be reflected in the final product. In the single flash that I've submitted the parts where I got lazy are painfully obvious. And of course practice makes perfect. Keep it up, I'd like to see more from you.
Aye (: I'll follow your advice ^-^ Thanks a lot :D
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