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May 11, 2011 | 7:03 PM EDT
  • Daily Feature May 12, 2011

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Author Comments

This is my first flash with voice, it took longer than it should, but now I quit my job (with the intention of practicing everything I want to learn) and my next animations will come out super fast and I won't need to worry about time anymore, so they will probably be better too. I sometimes mess up my english, so, if there is anything wrong with the subtitles, let me know. Thanks.

Edit: Daily first? That's sweet! It makes me more confident and eager to get better! :)
Thanks everyone who voted and reviewed. Except the ones who gave me a bad score D: (JK bad feedback is also good.)

Reviews


TheTweenerTheTweener

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 23, 2012

Man I really appreciate your effort............ The storyline was good.......
I think you should do more animations so that you could get a flow :)



alessio-castigliaalessio-castiglia

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 6, 2011

yey!

very nice! I love the voice and the design! also the message is very thoughtful and nice! I just think you should fix the way he runs.. it's a bit sloppy! but it was fine! :D


Steinberg responds:

Yeaah, It really was a bit sloppy.
Frame by frame and running cycles are my weakness.
I will work on that for future projects.
Thanks for revieweing.


Notyu1459Notyu1459

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 26, 2011

Well voice acted and animated!

The lip animation was a bit off, as I've seen on your other works, but the problem was minimized by in-head dialogue. I like the moral this animation had, and overall, I think I was almost perfectly satisfied!

10/10! Good job!


Steinberg responds:

Thanks for the 10!


cowman91cowman91

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 25, 2011

haha wow

""horrible"
by: pepperattack
date: July 12, 2011
dumbest thing ever!

July 12, 2011
Author's Response:
Reviews are supposed to point out how the author can improve.
You don't know how to review.
Your review is the dumbest thing ever. " i have to agree with the author here that was a very bad unhelpful review. unhelpful to the author as well as viewers. anyway, i think this was great, good animation and sound quality with a pretty good message. however i can also see how some viewers may be offended by this if they had a family member who commit suicide cuz in a way youre calling their family member stupid. but all in all great flash.


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Steinberg responds:

Oh, well, I guess someone may think that this is offensive to suicidal people. But that's not my intention at all, I just want to spread a message to all people that hate life that everything can go better, but the only way to find that out is living, a lot of people who wanted to attempt suicide once, after two years or so think they would never consider it again because they found out a reason to live. So the real message is, "don't waste your precious life".
Thanks for the review! :)
I'm glad you liked it.


crashoveride1987crashoveride1987

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 15, 2011

amazing ^^

a true expression of how one mans perception of life can change in the face of near death or in this case certain death ^^;


Steinberg responds:

Thanks for the 10!